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托福独立写作高分范文:政府OR家人的帮助

2017-06-19来源: 啄木鸟教育浏览量:
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  托福独立写作真题题目多来自考生的回忆,在很多解析类文章中,可以看到很多托福写作题目是会重复之前的考题的,也就是会有考题题库。建议大家在备考托福写作过程中搜集常考题目,通过高分范文来把握写作方法,积累写作用词汇、句型、好的结构等。

  以下托福独立写作是A/D类型的:人们日常生活中解决重大问题时寻求家人的帮助或自己解决,而政府的帮助是没有必要的。属于生活方式类题目,又与政府相关。题目抽象,在写作时要注意具体化。同时注意具体化时要符合题干中“important problems in their daily life ”的限定。

  A/D: People can solve important problems in their daily life on their own or with the help from families; The help from the government is not necessary.

  托福独立写作范文

  In a society that changes as amazingly as ours, the role played by government in our daily life has been brought under the spotlight of mass media. Consequently, the general public and sociologists are wondering whether people can solve important problems individually or with the governmental support. Towards such a long running tug-of-war, I am inclined to claim that the help from government is necessary in the process of resolving important problems, especially in the aspects of protecting environment and addressing the disparity of educational resources.

  In the first instance, consider the environmental issues. As is common sense, the deteriorating natural environment is so severe and complicated that the solution of such a problem is far beyond the reach of any individuals or families. The serious air pollution in China is a good case in point. Despite the fact that people can take some actions such as wearing masks or taking the public transportation to relieve the haze occurring frequently in the major cities of China in some degree, the problem cannot be radically solved. To illustrate, the major cause responsible for the smoggy weather is nothing but the emission of waste gas such as dust and smog from an appalling number of heavy-pollution factories. In this case, it is the government that can get rid of the fundamental cause by shutting down these plants and enacting laws or regulations to restrict their production, which can’t be achieved by any individuals.

  In the second instance, the same logic goes to the educational problems. As is known to all, many school-age children in rural and remote areas are not able to receive education in school due to the lack of educational resources. According to a survey conducted by the Education Ministry in China in 2015, approximately 3 million kids in the Southwest of China didn’t have the chance to get educated on account of lacking in tables, textbooks and even spacious classrooms. When confronted with the issue mentioned above, what individuals or families can do is quite limited. Undoubtedly, only the government has the adequate financial resources and power to allocate educational resources to those places. For example, the government of China builds nearly 10,000 primary schools called Hope School in the distant places, which alleviates the disparity in educational resources between different regions to a large extent.

  Judging from what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that although the ability of individual or families is becoming stronger and greater than before, the help from government is of great necessity in the course of solving significant problems, especially those in the areas of education and environment.(438words)

  托福独立写作范文思路

  首段:从当前媒体使政府备受关注引出问题,然后点明观点,从环境保护和解决教育不公两件“大事”上看,政府的帮助是有必要的。

  第二段:环境保护问题—具体到中国大城市的雾霾,是由重污染工厂造成的,个人没有办法从根本上解决,只能通过政府责令某些工厂关停并制定法规来解决。

  第三段:教育不公问题—数据论证,明确教育问题很突出,政府做出了有效应对措施,个人、家庭影响微乎其微。

  尾段:一句话再次点明观点,尽管个人、家庭力量更强了,但是在像教育和环境问题上,政府帮助很是必要。

  重点词汇及句型

  bring under the spotlight 把...放在聚光灯下,使...被关注

  a long running tug-of-war 长期争议的话题

  be inclined to 倾向于…;有意

  disparity不同;不一致;不等

  relieve the haze 减轻雾霾

  be responsible for 对……负责;是……的原因

  an appalling number of  一个令人震惊的数字的

  enact laws or regulations 制定法律、法规

  the same logic goes to 同样的逻辑也适用于...

  on account of  由于;因为;为了…的缘故

  allocate 分配;指定

  alleviate 减轻,缓和

  a good case in point 一个很好的例子

  As is common sense, the deteriorating natural environment is so severe and complicated that the solution of such a problem is far beyond the reach of any individuals or families.

  so...that 句型

  托福写作备考中,积累素材是很重要的一个方面,大家要从托福独立写作高分范文中学习答题思路,整理出相关模板,并学习范文中的语言。

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