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2018年1月6日托福写作真题分析

2018-01-08来源: 啄木鸟教育浏览量:
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       2018年1月6日托福考试难度怎么样?托福写作部分考了什么话题?啄木鸟教育老师为大家带来关于本次托福写作考试的专业分析,希望对大家有所帮助。

  综合点评

  2018年首次托福写作考试难度一般,相信考生都能发挥得比较好。综合写作考的是历史类话题,关于苏格兰的Brochs的功能猜想,和TPO5的综合写作比较接近,练习过该题的学生应该不会觉得太难。本题重复了大陆2015年7月4日的考题。独立写作是生活类话题,关于家庭成员定期一起吃饭是否重要,考生一般不会在思路上出现明显的障碍,但是例证方面可能会落入只有个人经历的俗套,这就要求考生能够掌握多种例证方式。本题重复了2014年11月8日的考题。值得注意的是,本次考试的综合写作和独立写作部分都重复了过去的考题,建议考生可以关注一下近几年的托福写作机经。

  综合写作

  话题分类:历史类

  考题回忆:总论点关于苏格兰的Brochs的用途,阅读提出了三个可能的猜想,听力一一予以反驳。

  阅读部分

  1. 提供像城堡一样的防御

  2. 储存食物

  3. 为贵族提供居住地

  听力部分

  1. 这种石墙没有窗户,没法射击前来攻击的敌人,因此不可能是防御工事

  2. 这里面有water tank,可能会使得食物腐烂,并且这里面有生火做饭的痕迹,如果真是粮仓,会引发火灾

  3. Brochs有的是单独存在于较远的地方,有的是以group的形式存在的。而贵族不可能群居,也不可能住在较远的地方

  解题思路本题重复了大陆2015年7月4日的考题,同时TPO5的综合写作也和这道题目比较相似,考生可以参考。

  参考范文:The reading and the listening have a debate on the purpose of Scotland Brochs. The listening refutes all three hypotheses proposed by the reading.

  First, the reading suggests that these brochs are used as a defense because they have thick and high walls. However, the listening argues that defense structure usually have windows so that people can shoot arrows against perpetrators, in order to repel attackers from getting closer, but these brochs do not have any windows.

  Second, the reading believes brochs to be food storage. However, the listening casts doubt on this, by saying that there are water tanks in the brochs. This might spoil the food stored in them since moisture tends to accelerate food decaying. Also, there is evidence of cooking inside the brochs, but cooking can easily cause fire, which again damage the food.

  Finally, the reading argues that these brochs could be the residence of the chieftains and leaders of the tribes. However, according to the speaker, this claim does not hold water, either. Normally, leaders live near their people, but brochs are isolated from villages. Also, brochs are built in clusters, but people certainly do not need so many leaders living close to each other.

  独立写作

  话题分类:生活类

  考题回忆:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays it is not important for family members to regularly have meals together. Use specific reasons and examples to support your idea.

  解题思路:和家人一起吃饭这件事情考生肯定经常做,但是很少有人会考虑这件事情是否重要。如果觉得重要,常见的理由包括:增进亲情,交流近况,尊重传统等;而不重要的理由往往是有代沟,怕麻烦和浪费时间。考生在举例的时候可以使用个人经历,也可以使用假设性的事例,甚至是统计数据等。

  Disagree- not important

  -generation gap

  -geographical barrier

  -reduced efficiency

  Agree- important

  -strength family bond

  -exchange news

  -get advice

  -follow the customs

  -keep healthy

  参考范文:With the accelerating pace of life, many people now are striving to keep a balance between life and work. As a result, some of them attach little importance to family meals, arguing that they can hardly spare time for a family get-together. However, in my opinion, it is still important for family members to have meals together regularly, since the meal encompasses more than simply food.

  First, having meals with our family means we can exchange news with other family members, which translates into a stronger family bond. As we all know, family meals always involve casual chat with family members over one’s recent development. In this way, we can get to know what others have done, are doing or are going to do. By exchanging personal news like this, we strengthen our family bond. For example, over a family meal on Saturday, the son may accidentally mention that he has made a first try on playing ice hockey this week and finds it fascinating. The father, being a big fan of ice hockey, is likely to keep a mind tag and may either take his son to practice or to watch a match. Eventually, the father and the son can form a strong bond between themselves.

  Second, regular family gatherings over meals allow us to seek advice from other family members. Normally, when someone faces an important decision or a puzzling problem, he or she turns to others for advice, and no occasion can be better than a casual family meal on which one can ask for advice without feeling embarrassed. For example, when the husband hints that he has been given a chance to work at an overseas branch, but was hesitant on this decision, because he is not sure whether this will put his wife under too much pressure, the wife may encourage him to seize the chance by telling him that she would certainly like to move to a new country so that she can experience different culture. Or if she really dislikes the idea, she can also wave it off or voice her own opinion in a casual way.

  Finally, eating regularly with our family helps us to keep healthy. For one thing, family meals usually follow a fixed schedule, which means one takes a certain meal at a certain time of the day. However, these days, when people are eating alone or attending a business banquet, they tend to eat too late or skip one or two meals for lack of time. This unhealthy lifestyle can certainly lead to some diseases related to digestion. For another, as family meals are often eaten at home, rather than at restaurants, we can eat healthier food. This is because home-made food often does not contain so much fat, salt or sugar as food at restaurants. Also, eating at home does not involve a lot of alcohol, which is quite common in business settings, especially in China. In the long run, we can easily keep our blood pressure and body fat at a normal level by eating regularly with our family at home.

  In conclusion, despite our ever tighter schedule, it is still important for us to squeeze time for family meals on a regular basis, as it allows us to exchange news, seek advice and keep healthy.

 

  (环球教育 蔡若思老师)

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