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美国留学机械工程专业个人陈述优秀范文

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   选择美国留学读机械工程专业的申请者们,最初与学校的联系除了套辞就是文书了,而文书与艺术类专业不同,没有对于高质量作品集的要求,因此打造一份属于自己的优秀文书对于每一位申请者而言至关重要。这里,小编总结出以下三篇机械工程专业的个人陈述(PS)范文以供大家参考,希望可以帮到大家。

  范文一

  From a very young age, I had aspirations of becoming an engineer, because I wanted to build machines that did not require direct human energy inputs to operate. I achieved this for the first time a few weeks later, designing a vehicle that carried it's energy stored in rubber-bands; it wasn't a roaring success, but the fact that it wasn't perfect only increased my desire to learn more about engineering.

  Soon afterwards, I became a serious motor sport enthusiast, and to understand the sport more, I began assisting my dad and his mechanic in the maintenance of our family cars and electricity generator. I quickly learnt and understood the function of every part of the generator and before long, my dad ran out of answers to my questions, like: 'Why do high performance engines often have up to six valves per cylinder when two would do the job?'. He therefore encouraged me to read further about engineering, and a few books later, I knew what

  I was devoting my life to.

  The more I learn about mechanical engineering, the more assured I become that a career as a mechanical engineer is suited to me. A few years ago whilst researching for a physics assignment, I discovered that most cars are 20 to 30 percent efficient at best. This statistic is unacceptable, and it had a big influence on my decision to study mechanical engineering, with my focus being engine design. In addition, learning subsequently of the rotary engine, continuously variable transmission (cvt), pneumatic and desmodromic valve

  control, hydraulics and many other interesting concepts has further trengthened my decision to study mechanical engineering, and it is my belief that I really can make a mark in the automobile industry.

  After deciding to become an engineer, I set out to find the qualities necessary for success. In the process, I read about Heinrich Maybach, Thomas Edison, Isambard Brunel, Ernst von Siemens, and a host of others. Of all the great engineers I have learnt about, the one that inspires me the most is Thomas Edison. This is because unlike all the others, he not only was talented as an engineer; he was also a brilliant businessman.

  I believe that success, as an engineer in this day and age, requires technical competence and a combination of management, leadership, communication and business skills. Leadership is something that I have naturally and my school recognised this by appointing me a senior prefect, which I believe has further improved my leadership and communication skills. In addition, I recently set up a maths club in my school where sixth-formers who are good at maths help pupils from the junior school with their study and homework. This has improved my communication and presentation skills tremendously.

  Reading Robert Kiyosaki's book, 'Rich Dad, Poor Dad', taught me the importance of having financial and business skills. To improve these skills, I volunteered at my local British Heart Foundation shop for a few months, to understand how charities make money. This turned out to be a very valuable educational experience.

  When I have time outside my curricular and club activities, I am a very enthusiastic sportsperson. My main sporting interests are football and the high jump. Presently, I am in the process of starting up a football team for the sixth-formers in my school, to improve general physical fitness and to foster a sense of belonging among the new sixth-formers in my school. I am also working towards a sports leadership award. In addition, I am involved in Greenwich council's Gifted and Talented program called 'xtrahot', and I have attended a

  number of seminars and workshops as part of the program.

  It is my hope that a degree from your university would serve as a solid base for a successful career in engineering, where hopefully, I would be involved in the development of new technology for cleaner and more efficient transportation systems.

  范文二

  An experienced engineer of security printing with China’s Central Bank, I now would like to scale higher intellectual heights by pursuing Ph. D. studies in mechanical engineering at your university. I believe that my strong background in CAD has adequately prepared me to embark on this endeavor.

  I have been working since 1999 for the People’s Bank of China, a Chinese version of the Federal Reserve, at its unique research institute of security printing, with the responsibility of designing the Chinese currency and the machinery to produce it. By engaging me in a variety of projects, the job afforded me ample exposure to cutting-edge developments in computer technologies, particularly in CAD software. I have, for example, recently redeveloped a purchased CAD (Computer Aided Design) software to make it more suitable for our own purposes. By adding our own part/subassembly to the database and make our own drawing criteria, we have achieved dramatically better efficiency.

  My job performance, which has won me professional respect from all of my colleagues, was achieved thanks to the strong background I acquired as a student in computer science. My undergraduate GPA ranked first among the 63 students of classmates in mechanical department, for which I was awarded first-class and second-class prizes many times. My graduate GPA ranked among the top 4% of the 105 students in my year, which won me the “San Hao” scholarship every year during the three years of my graduate studies.

  Unlike many other Chinese students, who are content with performing well in exams, I made a point of learning through my own hands-on experiences. In the Master’s program at the Beijing Institute of Printing, I gained an in-depth understanding of artificial intelligence, including expert system and genetic algorithm, especially in neural network. For my thesis, I programmed a multi-level BP neural network with C language to analyze my mathematical model, and applied much of my knowledge in optimization. I thus became able to program with a host of different computer languages, especially C++, with which I helped my graduate advisor to design a paper-cutting machine. To analyze the mechanism statically and dynamically, I programmed a software system to analyze and emulate it on screen. In undergraduate studies, I had often programmed with Fortran77 and the Basic language.

  Upon the completion of my Master’s studies, I easily passed the doctoral record examination in CAD/CAM of Beijing University, one f the top universities in China. But I gave up the opportunity in order to gain more practical experience in the industry. The decision proved to be right, as it guaranteed me better access to sophisticated facilities, such as state-of-the-art personal computers. With the People’s Bank of China, I have thus accumulated solid expertise in many kinds of operating and application software systems, particularly in CAD. I now have a firm grip on the latest developments in computer science in China.

  The challenges I met and the successes I achieved at the People’s Bank have not only endowed me with confidence but also fired off my desire to further improve myself. I have enjoyed high-quality and efficient production with the use of a kind of PC-based CAD software, MDT, developed by Autodesk Corporation. I now have a dream: some day, every person can design his favorite product with some sort of CAD software, and then search for an ideal factory over high-speed internet its production; and the factory will put specifications of the product, as it has received them via the high-speed internet into its CIMS, and out pops the product, as designed, at the end of the factory’s production line. It is a beautiful dream for every engineer, but many difficulties the speed of data-transfer and how to manage the product data among CAD, CAM, CAPP and CAE systems. These questions are fascinating, and I would like to come up with my own answers to them.

  To prepare myself for advanced studies in your country, I have persisted in improving my English proficiency. As demonstrated by my score of 700 (96%) in the verbal section of GRE, I now have an adequate command of English for undertaking graduate studies in your program.

  After carefully comparing the strengths of many universities, I find Mercy University particularly suited for my purpose. It has got the best combination of quality faculty, many state-of-the-art facilities, and an intriguing academic environment. Currently, China still lags significantly behind Western countries in mechanical engineering. I hope that, with a few years of graduate studies under your seasoned guidance, I will be able to return to my motherland and help bring mechanical engineering in my country to international standards.

  Although my ultimate objective is a Ph. D. degree, I am willing to do a Master’s degree if necessary. In either case, I would like to concentrate my studies in one or a combination of the following areas: CAD, CAM, CIMS, Computer graphics, Mechanical design, Mechanical manufacturing, Optimization, Artificial intelligence, and Robotics. Your favorable evaluation of my application will be highly appreciated.

  范文三

  I have grown accustomed to the sight of commercial aircraft, especially the underside of the aircraft. Having lived parallel to the flight path to the runway at the Dubai airport, the opportunity to sight aircraft passing overhead every few minutes has become a norm in my life. My interest in the aerospace industry however goes beyond the appreciation of an aircraft. For as long as I can remember, I have been fascinated by motorised vehicles and structures of all sorts, ranging from buildings to bridges. Living in Dubai has allowed me to pursue this fascination. Accompanying my father whilst he was on business around the city has allowed me to meet people at various construction sites and factories which has helped me to learn about manufacturing and developing processes; it has also given me a valuable insight into how engineers put to use their education in the ‘real world’.

  It is only two years ago that my general interest in engineering found a focus in a specific field. A public lecture given by an engineer from the prestigious ******* Institute of Technology steered me in a direction which I believe is compatible with my interests and passions. I felt that I had seen an image of myself in this engineer with regard to the interest and curiosity we shared in why things happen and work the way they do. The presentation was about aircraft and how they function. Leaving the lecture, I remember thinking to myself that this is what I want to do with my life. I followed up this clearer goal by taking Physics, Chemistry and Mathematics at A-Level because I believed this would challenge me intellectually and also begin to provide some answers to my innate curiosity in ‘how things work’. Since then I have taken a great interest in aircraft design. As I travel extensively, I have had plenty of time and motivation to consider possible systems that would enable the passenger to have a more pleasant flight. I also make use of any chance to find out more about developments in the aerospace industry – certainly in cabin design, but even more so in changes in the internal engineering features.

  To pursue my passion for building and designing things, I volunteered to join a team which would represent my school at a NASA sponsored Space Settlement Design competition. I was selected to head up the automation section of the project which, in short, involved designing landing docks for spacecraft and also presenting possible designs of spacecraft. This experience taught me a great deal about the importance of team work as well as how stimulating and effective working together with others as a single unit can be. It also helped me realise the satisfaction I have always gained from problem solving and working towards better solutions; it brought to mind an early sense of satisfaction when as a 12 year old I found an efficient way of getting into my top bunk bed with ease(the bunk-bed did not have a ladder. This I accomplished with the use of a series of handles and steps placed at crucial hand and foot positions.

  Studying at an international residential school in ******, away from home has taught me a great deal about independence and self reliance. Further, it has given me the privilege of strong relationships with people from a variety of different cultures and backgrounds. It has also taught me to appreciate and accept things and circumstances that I may not be accustomed to.

  I enjoy the activities I involve myself in, especially those on the sporting field. I have represented my school at hockey, cricket, and tennis and recently went on a football sports tour of the Middle East. Being part of a sporting team has allowed me to learn how to work as a member of a team no matter how large or small my role in the team may be. Last year I was elected by a committee of staff and students to run the Student Council Canteen which sells items of food to members of the student body. This same committee also elected me to become an executive of the Student Council. This involves corresponding with students of all ages about school life and any inconveniences they face or things they find satisfying. I am in the process of completing the silver award of the Duke of Edinburgh scheme. This has taught me about perseverence and endurance and the rewards of hard work. Through this scheme I have also been able to complete a first-aid course certified by the school and have been able to help out at the school hospital.

  I am sure that my inherent passion for vehicles (especially the sort that fly) will enable me to study aerospace engineering with the enthusiasm and perseverance required to succeed. My experience of working within the British Curriculum away from home and in an international setting, convinces me that I will adjust easily to university life in Britain and enjoy it immensely.

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